Area: mobieusMarket / BBS (audit p3) · Surface: /bbs (Get listed CTA) · Dimension: law-violations · Severity: cosmetic
Doubled article 'a a' in the customer-facing copy on the BBS page's get-listed CTA. Law 1 (kick-ass / polished surfaces) — a visible typo on a public marketing-style CTA. Note the same sentence also uses an em dash, which the SmartBrevity copy standard bans, but the duplicate 'a a' is the clear defect.
Evidence
platform/templates/bbs/index.php:396 `Want your system listed as a a Featured BBS? Your visitors can connect directly from their web browser — no telnet client needed.`
Suggested fix. Change 'listed as a a Featured BBS' to 'listed as a Featured BBS'. While editing, consider replacing the em dash to match the SmartBrevity copy rule: 'connect directly from their web browser, no telnet client needed.'
Filed by the automated tenant-app audit and adversarially evidence-verified. Status: verified. Open — not yet actioned.
Patrick Bass
@mobieus